Some people believe that the only purpose for anyone to learn a second language is to travel or work abroad. Others argue that this is not the only purpose why someone needs to learn a second language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
Some argue that the only reason for anybody to learn
new
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a new
language
is to travel for
another country to work or study, Change preposition
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while
others claim that there is another purpose to learn a second language
.However
, in this
essay, I will discuss both perspectives and provide my own opinion.
On the one hand, learning languages
by anyone can gives
him many advantages. Wrong verb form
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Firstly
, learning another language
can help him in his studies and expand his knowledge, as he will read eassies
and books in different Correct your spelling
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languages
Secondly
, he will explore another culture because the language
always tell
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, additionally
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easliy
and have many friends. Correct your spelling
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For example
, I learned english
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I was young, it is
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,
because if I didn't find materials for my field in my first Remove the comma
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language
, I searched in this
language
and had a lot of resources.
On the other hand
, people
who learning Change preposition
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it can help them for traveling
abroad to work or to continue their studies, it can be the only reason for them, but it Change preposition
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mean that learning Wrong verb form
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For instance
, my brother learned germany
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working
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while
I had learned it just for fun, and to read more books in this
language
.Therefore
, everyone can had
his own reason why he wants to learn new Change the verb form
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languages
.
In conclusion, learning languages
has many advantages and it can help for travel to others
countries or just for fun, but it always can help the person and gives him many chances.Correct quantifier usage
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
You have successfully included an introduction and a conclusion in your essay, which adds clarity and helps in understanding your stance.
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