Some people believe that the only purpose for anyone to learn a second language is to travel or work abroad. Others argue that this is not the only purpose why someone needs to learn a second language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.
Some argue that the only reason for anybody to learn
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others claim that there is another purpose to learn a second Linking Words
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coherence cohesion
You have successfully included an introduction and a conclusion in your essay, which adds clarity and helps in understanding your stance.
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You presented both views on the topic and clearly referenced personal examples, which strengthen your argumentation.