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The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Malborne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Malborne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020
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The chart presents the attendees' numbers in a variety of activities in
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Melbourne's social
center
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 from 2000 to 2020.
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,
it is clear that
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 the clubs of movie and combat stayed at the same level in
these 20-year period
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. An increasing number of people who like to play ping pong can be seen in
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as well as
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music
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, amateur dramatics became less and less popular. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that compared to 2000, the sum of table tennis lovers rose to about 54 in 2020. When it comes to the dramas, the figure of actors was significantly dropped to approximately 6 in the end. In the beginning, there was no performer at all, but it was growing in the following years. The number of film watchers had some fluctuation in sixty-something. Martial arts practitioners' number fluctuated minorly many times, but at least they had 30 people.
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