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The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table chart illustrates the statistics of
oil
 formation in the
year
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years
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 2000 and
in
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2004, where the nations are Nigeria,
Chad
,
Congo
 and Somalia.
To begin
 with,
Congo
 had a high
oil
production
 from 2000 to 2003 and the proportions were 275.000, 234.000,
222.000and
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222.000 and
 215.000 respectively. In the
last
year
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year,
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 the manufacturing of
oil
 was less in
Congo
 as compared to Nigeria, where the former country had 203.00 and the
later
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latter
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 was 213.000. In
nigeria
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Nigeria
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 the
production
 of
oil
 was
in
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second
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 number in the list from the
year
 2000 to 2003.
Whereas
, the
production
 number was 205.00, 201.000,190.000 and 210.000 respectively.
However
, With regards to
Chad
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Chad,
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 the
production
 of
oil
 was zero in
initial
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the initial
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 three years and in four
year
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years
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 the number was 8.000 in
Chad
. In 2004 the formation of
oil
 was
same
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the same
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 50.000 in
Chad
 and Somalia.In view of Somalia, the
production
was start
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started
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with
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at
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 5.000 and
then
 it
start
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started
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grwoing
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growing
 and reached
at
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21.00 in 2003.
Overall
, it can seem easy
Congo
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that Congo
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 had a higher
production
 of
oil
 in
first
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the first
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 four years and
Chad
 had
a
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the
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 least formation of
oil
 in embark
four
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fourth
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year
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, year, chad, congo, production with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production levels
  • Trends
  • Increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Stable
  • Peak production
  • Output
  • Significant changes
  • Yearly comparison
  • Global production
  • Correlations
  • Patterns
  • Volume of production
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