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The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table chart illustrates the statistics of
oil
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 formation in the
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year
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years
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 2000 and
in
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2004, where the nations are Nigeria,
Chad
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,
Congo
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 and Somalia.
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 with,
Congo
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 had a high
oil
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production
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 from 2000 to 2003 and the proportions were 275.000, 234.000,
222.000and
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222.000 and
 215.000 respectively. In the
last
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year
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year,
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 the manufacturing of
oil
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 was less in
Congo
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 as compared to Nigeria, where the former country had 203.00 and the
later
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latter
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 was 213.000. In
nigeria
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Nigeria
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 the
production
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 of
oil
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 was
in
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second
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 number in the list from the
year
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 2000 to 2003.
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, the
production
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 number was 205.00, 201.000,190.000 and 210.000 respectively.
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, With regards to
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Chad
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Chad,
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 the
production
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 of
oil
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 was zero in
initial
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the initial
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 three years and in four
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year
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years
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 the number was 8.000 in
Chad
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. In 2004 the formation of
oil
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 was
same
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the same
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 50.000 in
Chad
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 and Somalia.In view of Somalia, the
production
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was start
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with
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at
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 5.000 and
then
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 it
start
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grwoing
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growing
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at
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21.00 in 2003.
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, it can seem easy
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Congo
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that Congo
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 had a higher
production
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 of
oil
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 in
first
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the first
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 four years and
Chad
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 had
a
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the
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 least formation of
oil
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 in embark
four
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fourth
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year
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, year, chad, congo, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production levels
  • Trends
  • Increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Stable
  • Peak production
  • Output
  • Significant changes
  • Yearly comparison
  • Global production
  • Correlations
  • Patterns
  • Volume of production
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