The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.

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the

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of British

passengers

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who used cars, buses and trains to make their regular journeys from 1970 to 2030. After analysing the line graph, it can be seen clearly that, in 1970 the

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of

travelers

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who used trains was about 4.5

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which slightly decreased to 3

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in the period of 6 decades

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by buses, the

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of travellers was approximately 2

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in 1970 that gradually increased to 3

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till

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2000 after that it went smoothly to

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2010

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went

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5

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in the

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decade

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.

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, the line shows that the

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of

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who used cars for their day-to-day work was around 5.5

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in 1970 and no change occurred until 1980.

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from 1980 the

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of

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climbed to 6.5

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in 2000 and

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it approached

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the biggest value of 9

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in 2030.

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, it is noticeable that the

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of

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using the bus was lowest

at the end

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of the

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whilst the

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of

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who travelled by car was bigger in the latter decades.