The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.

The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.
The line graph depicts
that
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the
number
of British
passengers
who used cars, buses and trains to make their regular journeys from 1970 to 2030. After analysing the line graph, it can be seen clearly that, in 1970 the
number
of
travelers
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who used trains was about 4.5
million
which slightly decreased to 3
million
in the period of 6 decades
while
by buses, the
number
of travellers was approximately 2
million
in 1970 that gradually increased to 3
million
till
decade
2000 after that it went smoothly to
decade
2010
then
went
upto
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5
million
in the
last
decade
.
Further
, the line shows that the
number
of
passengers
who used cars for their day-to-day work was around 5.5
millions
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in 1970 and no change occurred until 1980.
whereas
from 1980 the
number
of
passengers
climbed to 6.5
million
in 2000 and
then
it approached
to
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the biggest value of 9
million
in 2030.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the
number
of
passengers
using the bus was lowest
at the end
of the
decade
whilst the
number
of
passengers
who travelled by car was bigger in the latter decades.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, million, decade with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.

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  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • commute
  • mode of transport
  • fluctuating trend
  • downward trend
  • public transport policies
  • preferences
  • railway infrastructure
  • economic factors
  • environmental factors
  • technological factors
  • sustainable commuting
  • noticeable increase
  • investments
  • dominance
  • propensity
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