The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.

The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.
The given maps
compares
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compare
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the layout of Kimsville town in 2002 and how it looks today.
Overall
, there are new facilities constructed and some replacements are made
in particular
areas. In 2002, there were trees in each corner of the town. The
city
centre
was located in the middle of the town. The factory was built on the right side of the
city
centre
, and there were no buildings on the left side of the
city
centre
. The shopping
centre
took its place on the north of the
city
centre
, and on its south, there was an old cinema. Now, the shopping and
city
centre
location
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locations
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remain unchanged.
However
, the trees at the top and bottom left corner are replaced
into
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with
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new facilities, new apartments
occupied
Wrong verb form
occupy
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the top and
football
Correct article usage
the football
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stadium takes its space on the bottom.
Moreover
, the factory turns into a building owned by a software company and the old cinema becomes a pub.
Furthermore
, a new train station is constructed at the empty lot on the left of the
city
centre
.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • residential areas
  • commercial facilities
  • economic growth
  • population expansion
  • employment opportunities
  • transportation infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • environmental conservation
  • industrial areas
  • urban development
  • transformation
  • relocation
  • quality of life
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