The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.

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The given maps

compares

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the layout of Kimsville town in 2002 and how it looks today.

Overall

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, there are new facilities constructed and some replacements are made

in particular

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areas. In 2002, there were trees in each corner of the town. The

city

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centre

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was located in the middle of the town. The factory was built on the right side of the

city

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centre

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, and there were no buildings on the left side of the

city

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centre

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. The shopping

centre

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took its place on the north of the

city

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centre

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, and on its south, there was an old cinema. Now, the shopping and

city

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centre

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location

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locations

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remain unchanged.

However

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, the trees at the top and bottom left corner are replaced

into

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with

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new facilities, new apartments

occupied

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occupy

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the top and

football

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the football

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stadium takes its space on the bottom.

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, the factory turns into a building owned by a software company and the old cinema becomes a pub.

Furthermore

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, a new train station is constructed at the empty lot on the left of the

city

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centre

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
residential areas
commercial facilities
economic growth
population expansion
employment opportunities
transportation infrastructure
connectivity
green spaces
environmental conservation
industrial areas
urban development
transformation
relocation
quality of life

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The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparsions where relevant.

Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The world today is a safer place and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Social media has completely changed the way family and friends communicate with each other. What ore the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?