The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas of a European country between 1987 and 2007

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visited

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the different three places ( the

coast

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, the

mountains

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and the lakes) in e European country from 1987 to 2000. Looking

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an

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structure it is rapidly apparent that the number of international visitors to the

coast

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has decreased over the past five years. Despite the

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low numbers, there has been a sharp increase in the number of visitors to the lake by the end,

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those visiting the

mountains

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have increased gradually. After analysing the graph, it can be seen that in 1987, 40% of international individuals visited the

coast

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which declined to about 35% in 1992.After

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value increased up to approximately 75% in 2007.

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, in 1987, 20% of international individuals went to see the

mountains

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which increased steadily to around about 33% in 2007. In 1987, the percentage of foreign visitors was 10%, increasing to 40% by 1997.

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figure rose

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to 72% in 2002, before dropping to 50% in 2007. The

coast

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had the highest visitor numbers among the three areas. Meanwhile, both the

coast

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and the

mountains

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experienced growth in their visitor counts.