The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. 

Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given data illustrates a comparison between the
population
in New Zealand between 2011 and 2012 over five major ranges of
ages
; all
ages
, under 15, 15-39, 40-64, and above 65.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that a range of 65+ was the
group
with the highest percentage of
change
,
while
in contrast
, under 15 and 15-39 was the
group
that experienced a decline the most.
Moreover
, the other
ages
had a positive
change
percentage. In terms of the higher percentage of
change
, the majority
people
of above 65 in the first year began with 573.946
people
, who experienced a relatively stable increase of 4% to 596,903
people
in 2012. Regarding the lowest
change
of
population
, the
group
under 15 and 15-39 stood at 1577.256 and 1. 574.102, relatively.
Thereafter
, in 2012 decreased by around -0.2%, with a
population
of 896.364 and 1.57.102
people
.
However
, the other age
group
, which is all
ages
and 40-64 rose precisely 0,6% in 2012,
while
starting in 2011 for 4.381.126 and 1.331.907.
In addition
, the age
group
of 40-64 was the
group
with the highest number of the
population
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, ages, group, change, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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  • population growth
  • age group
  • increase
  • decline
  • elderly population
  • aging population
  • working-age population
  • stable labor force
  • modest increase
  • significant change
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