You were late for a friend’s wedding recently and would like to explain why. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •apologize for being late •explain the reason why you were late •suggest some activities you could do together when you both have time You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

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Dear Harman, Hope you are doing great. I want to give many congratulations on your marriage,
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sorry to have been late to the wedding palace, seriously at that time I felt so ashamed about how hard it could have been for me to confront you
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situation. The main cause of the delay in arrival was the high traffic jam
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an accident that occurred on the way since you know my city is far away from your town but seriously I was so frustrated
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waiting in traffic congestion as
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had so much excitement from the year when
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heard about your marriage. Anyway, I want to share some plans with you that
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summer, you and your wife will come to my house
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we will go hill station for several days and spend time together
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I have discount coupons available for staying at some hotels . I am being apologised again and eager to hear your reply about the trip in summer. Yours Thankfully, Gurinder Singh

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coherence
Try to divide your ideas into clear paragraphs. For example, the reason for being late and your apology can be in separate paragraphs. This will enhance clarity and structure.
tone
Your tone is warm and friendly, which is suitable for a letter to a friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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