The bar charts below show the prevelance of obesity among boys and girls aged 12-19 years by ethnicity, in the United States for the years 2004 and 2014

The bar charts below show the prevelance of obesity among boys and girls aged 12-19 years by ethnicity, in the United States for the years 2004 and 2014
The presented bar charts compare data about the percentage of teenagers of both sexes who had weighting in the USA from various ethnicities in 2 different times namely, 2004 and 2014.
Overall
, it was important that the proportion of people who had obesties increase over the period of 10 years;
moreover
,
this
fraction for boys was higher than for girls.
According to
the boys' diagram, Hispanics, the main group who had a lot of obese boys, hit 13% in 2004;
then
it climbed significantly to 27% in 2014.
Non-Hispanic
whites, the second one in 2004, did not change a lot owing to the fact that it scored 12% in 2004;
thereafter
, its portion of 5% jumped in 2014. In the beginning,
non-Hispanic
blacks reached 11%;
furthermore
, it grew moderately to one-fifth. The girls' graph presents information that
in contrast
to the prior chart
Non-Hispanic
blacks had the maximum fraction. It was 16% at the start after that it leapt considerably to 29% in 2014. Later Hispanic and
non-Hispanic
whites hit 12% and 9% in 2004;
additionally
, their percentage of 5% rose in 2014.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prevalence
  • ethnicity
  • obesity rates
  • gender comparison
  • ethnic disparities
  • socio-economic factors
  • cultural factors
  • environmental factors
  • long-term health consequences
  • healthcare systems
  • government policies
  • community programs
  • adolescents
  • trend analysis
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