The table below shows the result of a survey asked 6800 Scottish (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the involvement of Scottish as correspondence (aged 16 years and over) in different cultural occasions a year ago.

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, it can be seen that the correspondence is divided into three groups

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16-24, 25-44, and 45-74, and totals. The group

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16-24 most participate in any performance

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as dancing, singing, playing musical instruments, and acting.

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computer based

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was the lowest

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that

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did, and the elderly

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were the group that at least

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. In detail, it can be seen that all

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were participating and took part in any performance activities around 22 per

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. Meanwhile,

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like undertaking any crafts, cultural purchases, and any visual arts around under 20 per

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around 19 %, 16%, and 15% respectively.

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, writing and computer-based activities were the lowest activities that the Scottish did around 7 per

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and 6 per

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respectively.

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, elderly

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in Scotland participated in undertaking any crafts

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at around 22 per

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, and the lowest was writing and

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that, any performance was the most popular

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that Scotland

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did with

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16-44.

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16-24

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part in any writing

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a year ago around 17 per

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, activity, people, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 7 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

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