The table below shows the result of a survey asked 6800 Scottish (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the result of a survey asked 6800 Scottish (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the involvement of Scottish as correspondence (aged 16 years and over) in different cultural occasions a year ago.
Overall
, it can be seen that the correspondence is divided into three groups
ages
16-24, 25-44, and 45-74, and totals. The group
ages
16-24 most participate in any performance
such
as dancing, singing, playing musical instruments, and acting.
While
,
computer based
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was the lowest
activity
that
people
did, and the elderly
people
were the group that at least
taking
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took
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part in
this
activity
. In detail, it can be seen that all
ages
were participating and took part in any performance activities around 22 per
cent
. Meanwhile,
the
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activities
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activity
like undertaking any crafts, cultural purchases, and any visual arts around under 20 per
cent
around 19 %, 16%, and 15% respectively.
In addition
, writing and computer-based activities were the lowest activities that the Scottish did around 7 per
cent
and 6 per
cent
respectively.
On the other hand
, elderly
people
in Scotland participated in undertaking any crafts
activity
at around 22 per
cent
, and the lowest was writing and
computer based
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computer-based
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around
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at around
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5 per
cent
.
Besides
that, any performance was the most popular
activity
that Scotland
people
did with
ages
16-44.
However
,
people
ages
16-24
were taken
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took
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part in any writing
activity
a year ago around 17 per
cent
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, activity, people, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 7 times.
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