The table below shows the result of a survey asked 6800 Scottish (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table illustrates the involvement of Scottish as correspondence (aged 16 years and over) in different cultural occasions a year ago.

Overall

, it can be seen that the correspondence is divided into three groups

ages

16-24, 25-44, and 45-74, and totals. The group

ages

16-24 most participate in any performance

such

as dancing, singing, playing musical instruments, and acting.

While

computer based

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was the lowest

activity

that

people

did, and the elderly

people

were the group that at least

taking

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took

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part in

this

activity

. In detail, it can be seen that all

ages

were participating and took part in any performance activities around 22 per

cent

. Meanwhile,

the

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activities

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activity

like undertaking any crafts, cultural purchases, and any visual arts around under 20 per

cent

around 19 %, 16%, and 15% respectively.

In addition

, writing and computer-based activities were the lowest activities that the Scottish did around 7 per

cent

and 6 per

cent

respectively.

On the other hand

, elderly

people

in Scotland participated in undertaking any crafts

activity

at around 22 per

cent

, and the lowest was writing and

computer based

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computer-based

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around

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at around

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5 per

cent

Besides

that, any performance was the most popular

activity

that Scotland

people

did with

ages

16-44.

However

people

ages

16-24

were taken

Wrong verb form

took

show examples

part in any writing

activity

a year ago around 17 per

cent

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

219 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The table below shows the result of a survey asked 6800 Scottish (aged 16 years and over) whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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