In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is believed that passengers will travel inside vehicles including
cars
, buses and trucks without any drivers.
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essay will argue that the advantages of
this
outweigh the drawbacks. The essay will first
demostrate
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demonstrate
that the level of punctuality will rise
whereas
we would not be worried about air pollution caused by automobiles, followed by an analysis of how the primary disadvantage, possible job loss, is not valid.
To begin
with, the more digitalized new
cars
are, the less effort we need to control them. Admittedly,
although
machines can experience disruptions, they are better than us in calculating and planning and getting more accurate day-to-day, so, we can totally trust them and be absolutely sure to reach the destination on time and in safety.
For instance
, electronic Tesla
cars
created by famous businessman and engineer Elon Musk are provided with
artificial
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intelligence program using which
driver
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do not need to control
it
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,
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since it can determine
causing
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accidents and prevent them by
itselves
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themselves
.
Moreover
, most of
vehicles
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which do not need control on them are often electric ones and do not consume oil and petrol. Obviously, the streets of megacities are always full of
transports
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and the sky is covered with clouds containing carbon
dyoxide
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dioxide
.
Thus
, electric
cars
are completely not capable of polluting the air and
harmless
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to
environment
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. Those opposed to
this
say that many drivers might lose their jobs and not
to
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ensure their families.
However
, there is no actual evidence to support
this
view and
chauffers
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chauffeurs
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are often people with degrees.
For example
, my taxi driver is a man who works as
librarian
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in a local library and working as a taxi is only his part-time job. In conclusion, the fact that in the future there will be vehicles without
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and there will be only passengers in
car
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cars
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leads to positive effects on our nature and the easier life clearly outweighs the flawed argument that it can cause job loss.
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Try to provide more detailed analysis or elaboration on your points. For instance, while mentioning specific examples like Tesla, further discussion on how exactly they are successful or areas they might struggle could add depth.
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coherence cohesion
Clear introduction and conclusion that summarize the main arguments effectively.
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Good attempt to provide examples, such as the mention of Tesla cars, illustrating points on technology and pollution.
coherence cohesion
Logical flow of ideas, as the essay maintains a structured argument about the positive impacts of driverless vehicles.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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