The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. • Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The illustrated pie charts compare commuters'
reasons
for choosing cycling or driving as a transportation method to work.
Use synonyms
Overall
, most cyclists are concerned about health and pollution issues, Linking Words
while
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drivers
prioritize comfort.
Looking at charts in more detail, well over half of the wheelers assert that their primary reason for cycling is health and fitness or diminishing pollution. Use synonyms
In contrast
, two-fifths of the Linking Words
drivers
opt for comfort. Use synonyms
In addition
, having no parking problems allocated for 15% of cyclists' choices, Linking Words
while
distance makes up for over one-fifth of Linking Words
drivers
' Use synonyms
reasons
.
In terms of less popular Use synonyms
reasons
, a minority of cyclists and Use synonyms
drivers
argue about the faster means of travel with 12% and 14% respectively. Use synonyms
Additionally
, a need for carrying objects garnered an equivalent share of motivations to the speed. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Being costless contributes to 13% of total Linking Words
reasons
for cycling to work, Use synonyms
while
just over one-tenth of Linking Words
drivers
suggested driving to be safer than cycling.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words reasons, drivers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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