The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. • Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the reasons 

why people travel to work by bicycle 

or by car.

• Summarize the information by 

selecting and reporting the main 

features, and make comparisons 

where relevant
The illustrated pie charts compare commuters'
reasons
for choosing cycling or driving as a transportation method to work.
Overall
, most cyclists are concerned about health and pollution issues,
while
drivers
prioritize comfort. Looking at charts in more detail, well over half of the wheelers assert that their primary reason for cycling is health and fitness or diminishing pollution.
In contrast
, two-fifths of the
drivers
opt for comfort.
In addition
, having no parking problems allocated for 15% of cyclists' choices,
while
distance makes up for over one-fifth of
drivers
'
reasons
. In terms of less popular
reasons
, a minority of cyclists and
drivers
argue about the faster means of travel with 12% and 14% respectively.
Additionally
, a need for carrying objects garnered an equivalent share of motivations to the speed.
Furthermore
, Being costless contributes to 13% of total
reasons
for cycling to work,
while
just over one-tenth of
drivers
suggested driving to be safer than cycling.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words reasons, drivers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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