The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The line chart depicts the average carbon dioxide (CO2)
emissions
per person
in four distinct countries (the UK
, Sweden
, Italy, Portugal) from 1967 to 2007.
To commence, by 1967 the levels of CO2 emissions
per person
in the UK
was
the highest at approximately 11 metric Correct subject-verb agreement
were
tonnes
, followed by Sweden
, amounting to around 9 metric tonnes
. In comparison, emissions
in Italy and Portugal were considerably lower, at about 4 metric tonnes
and 2 metric tonnes
, respectively.
From 1977 to 1997, emissions
in the UK
remained relatively stable at about 10 metric tonnes
. Conversely
, CO2 emissions
per person
in Sweden
rose substantially, peaking at over 10 metric tonnes
, before dropping dramatically to approximately 7 metric tonnes
over the following decade. During the same period, the CO2 emissions
in Italy grew noticeably to nearly 8 metric tonnes
by 1987, which surpassed those of Sweden
, while
Portugal’s emissions
surged remarkably to around 5 metric tonnes
.
By 2007, emissions
in the UK
and Sweden
continued to reduce steadily, dropping to just above 8 metric tonnes
in the UK
and slightly below 6 metric tonnes
in Sweden
. By 2007, Italy and Portugal's CO2 emissions
had stabilized, with Italy at approximately 8 metric tonnes
and Portugal slightly lower at around 6 metric tonnes
.
In conclusion, while
the CO2 emissions
per person
in the UK
and Sweden
experienced a downtrend over the period, Italy and Portugal demonstrated marked
increase.Correct article usage
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