The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps examine the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. In these maps, very drastic changes are happening.
Firstly
in 1910, all the town hall houses which were placed on the boat side
of Jordan St. which was left and right, were converted into the flat flats which are present on the left side
in 1950 in addition
, the 1910 factory area along with
wasteland, store, laundry and house was replaced by Sherman
mentions beside with the laundry and cafe in 1950 however
the two more stores were made and the total three of them was placed on the left side
of the town below the Sherman
St. Please stop at last
, the railway workers cottage, railway line and remaining wasteland in 1910 was replaced by Sherman
park in which upon and a children's play area was also
there and this
part park was placed on the left side
of the new lane.
There were many trees planted in Sherman
Park and many fish were in the pond in 1950;Submitted by raokaifxc on
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