The bar charts show precipitation in hot desert climate grasslands in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts show precipitation in hot desert climate grasslands in 1980 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar diagrams illustrate precipitation which took place in grasslands with
high temperature
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dry climate in the
year
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years
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1980 and 2000. The data was recorded on a monthly basis.
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, we can see that the
occurence
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occurrence
of rainfall has declined
substantitally
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substantially
in the region over the decades.
Also
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, the monthly pattern of rain has
also
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varied. In 1980, the highest number was seen in the month of March when the
precipitaion
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precipitation
was around 325mm
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the lowest number was just above 150mm, observed in July. In
majority
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of the months, the figure crossed the border of 200mm.
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, after two decades, the average rainfall significantly fell. The highest number
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just 53mm, seen in the months of July, August and November,
whereas
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the least rainfall
occured
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occurred
occurs
from March to April.
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