The bar charts show precipitation in hot desert climate grasslands in 1980 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar diagrams illustrate precipitation which took place in grasslands with
high temperature
dry climate in the Add a hyphen
high-temperature
year
1980 and 2000. The data was recorded on a monthly basis.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, we can see that the occurence
of rainfall has declined Correct your spelling
occurrence
substantitally
in the region over the decades. Correct your spelling
substantially
Also
, the monthly pattern of rain has also
varied.
In 1980, the highest number was seen in the month of March when the precipitaion
was around 325mm Correct your spelling
precipitation
while
the lowest number was just above 150mm, observed in July. In majority
of the months, the figure crossed the border of 200mm.
Add an article
the majority
On the other hand
, after two decades, the average rainfall significantly fell. The highest number being
just 53mm, seen in the months of July, August and November, Wrong verb form
was
whereas
the least rainfall occured
from March to April.Correct your spelling
occurred
occurs
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