The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the
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proportions
proportion
of females who attend
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educational
institutions in order to achieve higher
educationin
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education in
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five distinct nations over 35 years.
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, it is apparent that the amount of women who went to other
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to gain tertiary education was more in 2005 compared to that of in 1970. Canada had the most attendance in both years,
while
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Japan experienced
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the lowest amount of females in order to pursue their major.
According to
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chart, There was a similar percentage of women in both years in Canada, which was the
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highest
ratio as well, It was 60 per
cent
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. The proportion of
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attendance
in Germany stands
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in 1970 and 2005, the former was approximately 55 per
cent
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and the latter was just over 50 per
cent
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. Japan,
on the other hand
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, saw the lowest
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in both, which means roughly 40 per
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and 20
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respectively. In the UK and the USA, in the mentioned
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year
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, there was
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alike amount of
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attendances
attendance
. Almost 40
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in 1970 and nearly 60 per
cent
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in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • higher education
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • significant
  • comparison
  • identify
  • highest
  • lowest
  • contextual
  • global
  • relevant
  • constant
  • substantial
  • fluctuation
  • proportional
  • data
  • evaluate
  • analyze
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