The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates how many
females
and males pursued a
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further
education
, and if they were studying full-time or part-time, in three different periods in the UK.
Overall
, the number
of women that got into a full-time further
study
increased in each period given, while
the number
of men
had some minor fluctuations. Moreover
, the amount of women who were in a part-time education
also
grew gradually, and the same for the number
of men
.
In 1970/71, around 700 thousand
females
pursued a full-time further
education
, however
, 100 thousand
of them were in a part-time high
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higher
education
. Furthermore
, exactly 800 thousand
females
went to a higher education
with a higher study
in 1980/81, in contrast
, around 200 thousand
of those females
pursued a part-time education
. And in 1990/91, about 1000,000 got a full-time higher education
, while
only 200,000 did a part-time
For males, in 1970/71,1000 thousand
got a full-time further
study
, while
around 150 thousand
were in a part-time further
education
. Moreover
, 800 thousand
men
had a full-time study
in 1880/81. On the other hand
, just under 200 thousand
males had a part-time study
in higher education
. Additionally
, in the years 1990/91, the number
of men
in the
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study
increased and reached 900 thousand
. In contrast
, 200 thousand
of them had a part-time further
study
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Vocabulary: Replace the words females, education, number, study, men, thousand with synonyms.
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