some people opine that students are the best evaluator of teachers performance while other say that there are other ways to evaluate teachers performance. what is your view point. give reason and support yourself with example.

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judgement on professor's ability

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.In the following paragraphs,

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my notion and example . To commence with, let us shed some light on the first viewpoint. first and foremost, when

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they learn about their weakness and guide them properly with

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pass the

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with good grades

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, Research conducted by The University of British Colombia in Canada ,in Surrey in the year 2012 claims that 80% of pupils achieved

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with proper learning and training from

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at school.

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, we have seen in our life that some kids are not blessed with sharp memory even they are weak in learning so when they face the

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they often feel confident and can not even remember the studies which they did in past to pass the exams .

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and even in the worst situation their parent

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for their

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.To cite an example, an article published by Benjamin Bradlee in The Washington Post "LEARNING" in the United States in year 2010 claims that 40% of

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lose their jobs when authorities start evaluating kid's

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with their marks. To encapsulate , it can be considered that child achievement not only shows the efficiency of

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but at the

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few students are genetically weak in learning which has a bad effect on

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