The table shows the cost of water in five cities in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the information about the
water
charges in the five different cities of Use synonyms
the
Australia. It Correct article usage
apply
also
tells their cost in dollars. Linking Words
However
, the data in the table is examined in three Linking Words
catagories
.
The highest Correct your spelling
categories
billes
of $332 per household, are recorded in Perth. There $0.42 Correct your spelling
bills
are
charged for Correct subject-verb agreement
is
water
usage up to 123KL and $1.50 for over usage. The next in line is Sydney with $319 of Use synonyms
average
bill. Add an article
the average
an average
Therefore
, the ratio of cost is Linking Words
same
in the city, Correct article usage
the same
Linking Words
that
is $0.98.
The city Correct pronoun usage
which
Adelaide
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of Adelaide
,
charges approximately $312 and Brisbane $310 yearly. The amount paid by inhabitants for up to 125KL of Remove the comma
apply
water
Use synonyms
,
is $0.42 in Adelaide and $0.81 in Brisbane. Remove the comma
apply
However
, Linking Words
cost
of Correct article usage
the cost
water
for over 125KLUse synonyms
,
is about $1.00 in the first city and $0.84 in the other one.
As far as Remove the comma
apply
Malbourne
is concerned, the amount invested on Correct your spelling
Melbourne
water
yearly per household is around $253, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
ration
of low Correct your spelling
ratio
user
and over is Fix the agreement mistake
users
same
which is $0.78.Correct article usage
the same
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