Childood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsilbility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extend do you agree to this statement?

Pediatric obesity

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more serious in Australia.

Although

some individuals claim that schools should be responsible for controlling

student

's diets and physical activities, I strongly oppose

this

view. The first reason why I disagree with the opinion that schools should have responsibility

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student

's meals and the quantity of their

exercise

is that each child has different physical traits and backgrounds. 

Thus

, even if they consume the same

calorie

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and do the same

exercise

, the results on their bodies will

deffer

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differ

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.

This

fact makes teachers difficult to judge if

student's

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students'

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meals and

exercise

are appropriate. As they do not know if they eat and do physical activities properly for their bodies, their parents, who have

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understanding of their

children

should play pivotal roles in their health issues. Another justification for my view is that pediatric obesity is not triggered only by

student's

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students'

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behaviors

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in school. It may be influenced more by their

lifesytle

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lifestyle

choices at home.

For instance

, if they spend hours in front of a TV set or a computer

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snacking after school, it will be the main culprit for their overweight. As it is almost impossible for schools to supervise

student

's private time and correct them

instead

of their parents, they should not be accused of

children

's obesity issues. In conclusion, I vehemently oppose the idea that protecting

childrens

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children

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from being overweight is

school's

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the school's

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responsibility because

children

have different corporal characteristics and their private lifestyles mainly affect their weight.

Although

it will be reasonable to give some advice on how to avoid it to their parents as an educator, it is completely

parent's

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responsibility to control their

children

's diets and encourage them to do more

exercise

.