The diagram below shows the life cycle of salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. nb

The picture below illustrates the life in steps of the fish named

Salmon

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.

It is clear that

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,

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apply

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there are 6 steps to

be

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spawning

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adult

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an adult

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.

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Also

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they have names of

cycle

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cycles

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such

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as Eggs, Alevin, Fry,

Parr

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, Smolt,

Adult

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,

Spawning

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and Spawning

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Adult

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. First of all,

Salmon

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hatch from eggs. They hatch in about 3 months. After that

Salmon

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turned to Alevin. Feeds of yolk-sac for several weeks.

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Alevin became to Fry.

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one is 5 to 10 weeks old and swimming. From Fry several months old is

Parr

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. In that period develops "finger"

morkings

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markings

. After being

Parr

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the

Salmon

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turned to Smolt which

older

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was older

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than

Parr

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1

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to 3 years. In

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time will group and head out to sea.

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Then

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The

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next level is

Adult

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. Spends 1 to 8 years at sea. And

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becomes Spawning

Adult

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This

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one is the highest one. They spawn and die within 2 weeks.