The diagram below shows the life cycle of salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. nb

The picture below illustrates the life in steps of the fish named

Salmon

.

It is clear that

,

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apply

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there are 6 steps to

be

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apply

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spawning

adult

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an adult

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.

Also

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Also,

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they have names of

cycle

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cycles

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such

as Eggs, Alevin, Fry,

Parr

, Smolt,

Adult

,

Spawning

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and Spawning

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Adult

. First of all,

Salmon

hatch from eggs. They hatch in about 3 months. After that

Salmon

turned to Alevin. Feeds of yolk-sac for several weeks.

Then

Alevin became to Fry.

This

one is 5 to 10 weeks old and swimming. From Fry several months old is

Parr

. In that period develops "finger"

morkings

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markings

. After being

Parr

the

Salmon

turned to Smolt which

older

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than

Parr

1

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for 1

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to 3 years. In

this

time will group and head out to sea.

Then

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The

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next level is

Adult

. Spends 1 to 8 years at sea. And

at the end

becomes Spawning

Adult

.

This

one is the highest one. They spawn and die within 2 weeks.