The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. nb

The diagram below illustrates the stages of recycling

plastic

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bottles

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.

Overall

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, there are 9 steps in the diagram.

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Also

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Also,

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there are many stages

such

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as throwing

bottles

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,

delivery

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delivering

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from the bin to the recycling centre, sorting, compressing, crushing, producing

plastic

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bottles

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, heating and

at the end

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producing a new product. First of all, the people through the

plastic

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bottles

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to the bin and after that bin cars deliver to recycling centre. After delivered the workers will sort the

bottles

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.

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they compress into blocks. When the

bottles

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compresses

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compress

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into blocks they crush

that

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those

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bloks. After crushing, separated waste enters the water The next step producing

plastic

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pallets after washing them.

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Then

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plastic

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pallets heats to form row material. After will form a row

material

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. And

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last

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stage is producing end products. All

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this

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stages have

own

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their own

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difficulties, but in the

end

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end,

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will produce a new product.