The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. nb
The diagram below illustrates the stages of recycling
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, there are 9 steps in the diagram. Also
there are many stages Add a comma
Also,
such
as throwing bottles
, delivery
from the bin to the recycling centre, sorting, compressing, crushing, producing Replace the word
delivering
plastic
bottles
, heating and at the end
producing a new product.
First of all, the people through the plastic
bottles
to the bin and after that bin cars deliver to recycling centre. After delivered the workers will sort the bottles
. Then
they compress into blocks. When the bottles
compresses
into blocks they crush Change the verb form
compress
that
bloks.
After crushing, separated waste enters the water
The next step producing Correct determiner usage
those
plastic
pallets after washing them. Then
Correct your spelling
The
plastic
pallets heats to form row material. After will form a row material
. And Change preposition
of material
last
stage is producing end products. All Change the article
the last
this
stages have Change the determiner
these
own
difficulties, but in the Correct pronoun usage
their own
end
will produce a new product.Add a comma
end,
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