Nowadays many people choose to be self-employee rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
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is a contentious issue debate. Wheras
many people prefer to work for themselves rather than work for a certain company. Correct your spelling
Whereas
This
essay will examine some advantages and disadvantages of being self-employee
.
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a self-employee
To begin
with, there are some advantages to be
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being
self-employeed
. Correct your spelling
self-employed
Firstly
, flexible time, as an employee for ownselft
, someone hasCorrect your spelling
ownself
oneself
fully
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full
authorities
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authority
mangement
regardless obey some regulation from management. Correct your spelling
management
Furthermore
, all revenue is on you, the most important is you can manage your profit. For example
, someone who has property
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a property
business
and can sale
his/her property without Replace the word
sell
third
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a third
it
means all Correct pronoun usage
apply
benefit
will be hers/his.
Despite there Fix the agreement mistake
benefits
are
advantages, it's undeniable that Wrong verb form
being
this
self-employee
bring
some consequences, Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
such
as,
lost profit. it's Remove the comma
apply
obiously
clear that Correct your spelling
obviously
have
your own Wrong verb form
having
business
is not as easy as you imagined. When plan
is not working as we expected and Add an article
the plan
a plan
lead
to Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
broke
profit, someone could Correct word choice
broken
loose
their Correct your spelling
lose
ownself
alone. The other Correct pronoun usage
apply
things
that should be Fix the agreement mistake
thing
encounter
is how to Wrong verb form
encountered
managed
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manage
business
by yourself. Running a Correct article usage
a business
business
means you have sufficient ability in a business
from operation, marketing, financial, and management. For instance
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of
business
lead
to a successful Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
business
.
To conclude
, running a business
or to be
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being
self-employee
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a self-employee
have
many drawbacks, Correct subject-verb agreement
has
such
as possibility
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the possibility
to lose
profits and Change preposition
of losing
business
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task achievement
Clarify the main argument in the introduction to provide a clear overview of the essay's purpose.
task achievement
Give more specific examples to support your points, ensuring they directly relate to the advantages and disadvantages discussed.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical flow of ideas by linking paragraphs and sentences more effectively.
coherence cohesion
Use more transitional phrases to enhance the connection between points.
grammar vocabulary
Avoid grammatical errors and ensure subject-verb agreement is consistent throughout the essay.
task achievement
The essay covers both advantages and disadvantages of being self-employed, addressing the task prompt effectively.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present, providing a basic structure to the essay.
task achievement
Attempts to provide examples is a good approach to support the main ideas, even if the examples need to be more detailed.
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