The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.

The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.
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The provided pie charts
indicates
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data about the
sources
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of
fish
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is
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sent to America, and the supplied table displays the
amount
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of
whole
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wealth of
fish
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in 1988, 1992 and 2000. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest
percentage
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of
source
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of
fish
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was in Canada.
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, China did not export
fish
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as many as other
sources
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and
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country had the lowest
amount
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of
source
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of
fish
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imported in the US. In 2000, the
amount
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of total value for importing
fish
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was 10.72 billion dollars, (which was the highest
amount
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of total wealth over the period) just ahead of 1992 with 8.52 billion dollars in the United States of America.
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, the share of
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source
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of
fish
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imported for Canada was 60% in 1988. (which was the highest
percentage
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of
fish
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sources
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over the whole year).
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, the
percentage
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of
fish
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imported from Canada to the US was roughly a third (34%) and 28% in 1992 and 2000, respectively.
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, the
amount
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of whole value of
fish
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imported to America was 6.57 billion dollars in 1988. (which was the lowest proportion of
fish
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wealth over the period).
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, the
percentage
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of
source
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fish
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imported from China to the US was 13% in 1988, which was the lowest
percentage
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of
fish
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imported
sources
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, as opposed to in 1992 which was 20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sources, fish, amount, percentage, source with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Import origins
  • Total import value
  • Trends in import values
  • Trade patterns
  • Source distribution
  • Import dependency
  • Fluctuations in trade
  • Economic implications
  • Demand and supply dynamics
  • International trade policies
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