The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.
The given figure illustrates the imported other
fish
sources to the US in three years, 1988, 1992 and 2000 and the total amount
by millions of dollars
from Canada
, China and other countries
.
A glance at the illustration reveals that among these countries
the highest-value imported source of fish
to America was Canada
, however
, China did not send fish
as much as Canada
and others.
In 2000, the amount
of total value of importing fish
was 10.72 billion dollars
, which was the highest amount
of total amount
and other countries
had sent the largest amount
of sources fish
, although
, Canada
had the lowest amount
imported.On the other hand
, importing fish
in 19992 was much more rather than in 2000 by other countries
for about 46 per cent,though, which calculated not as much as 2000, for approximately 8.52 billion dollars
in incomes .
It is so given fact that Canada
in 1988 was the highest in importing fish
by 60 per centChange preposition
of
countries
and China with the lowest one 13 per cent, while
, the the minimum amount
of exporting fish
to the US was 6.57 billion dollars
.Submitted by takhtejamshid1400historikal on
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