The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.

The pie charts and table illustrates the information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US in the years 1988, 1992, and 2000.
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The given figure illustrates the imported
fish
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sources to the US in three years, 1988, 1992 and 2000 and the total
amount
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by millions of
dollars
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from
Canada
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, China and other
countries
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. A glance at the illustration reveals that among these
countries
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the highest-value imported source of
fish
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to America was
Canada
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,
however
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, China did not send
fish
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as much as
Canada
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and others. In 2000, the
amount
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of total value of importing
fish
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was 10.72 billion
dollars
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, which was the highest
amount
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of total
amount
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and other
countries
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had sent the largest
amount
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of sources
fish
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,
although
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,
Canada
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had the lowest
amount
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imported.
On the other hand
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, importing
fish
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in 19992 was much more rather than in 2000 by other
countries
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for about 46 per cent,though, which calculated not as much as 2000, for approximately 8.52 billion
dollars
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in incomes . It is so given fact that
Canada
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in 1988 was the highest in importing
fish
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by 60 per cent
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other
countries
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and China with the lowest one 13 per cent,
while
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, the the minimum
amount
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of exporting
fish
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to the US was 6.57 billion
dollars
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, amount, dollars, canada, countries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Import origins
  • Total import value
  • Trends in import values
  • Trade patterns
  • Source distribution
  • Import dependency
  • Fluctuations in trade
  • Economic implications
  • Demand and supply dynamics
  • International trade policies
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