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Many people used distance- learning programs to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefits as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 of
internet
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. One of the things that
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 or not, based on arguments and different reasons. To start with, we have to consider why distance- learning became a thing in the first place. Actually, it started to be publicly used when universities began to offer it to
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students
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 learning. It is mostly said that
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 method of education is not as sufficient when compared to being physically present at the class. In fact,
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students
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 his comfort zone and is not placed
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students
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 it was during the pandemic or in cases with low
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 to educational services. But, it would remain as a help and can not
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completely
 replace on campus
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studying
 at least in present time.

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task achievement
Try to add more specific examples or references to real-world scenarios to strengthen your argument.
clear comprehensive ideas
Aim to clarify some ideas more thoroughly to ensure they are as comprehensive as possible.
language accuracy
Work on grammar and spelling to minimize errors, enhancing overall clarity and professionalism.
introduction
The essay begins with a strong introduction, setting the stage for the argument.
task response
The benefits and drawbacks of distance learning are clearly discussed.
conclusion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the essay's main points.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • accessibility
  • self-paced learning
  • cost-effective
  • commuting costs
  • tuition fees
  • face-to-face interaction
  • networking
  • self-motivation
  • discipline
  • structured environment
  • extensive resources
  • laboratories
  • counseling services
  • distance-learning programs
  • traditional classes
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