The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.

The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of fast
food
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consumption in the UK between 1970 and 1990. From an
overall
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perspective, it is evident that the ratio of fast
food
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consumed are Hamburger and Fish and Chip saw an upward reverse pattern
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be observed in the figure for Pizza over the whole period surveyed. Commencing with the year 1970 , the data on fast
food
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eaten with pizza was the highest,at 300. The information for Fish and Chip was lower, at 100. Unpopular
food
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is hamburgers,
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, accounted for the lowest value, at 50. In the following years, by 1980, the dish Hamburger rose slightly to 80 before reaching 300 in 1990.
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the was a constant fall in that of Pizza, hitting a low of 200 in 1985 but fluctuating to 201 in 1990.At the same time,after climbing slightly to 150 within the first 2 years, the figure for Fish and Chips skyrocketed to a peak of 500 in 1990, making it the top dish
at the end
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of the time frame.
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