Some people believe that the best way to encourage children that have a healthy diet at school and some people believe that parents should teach them to have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate about whether

school

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should be responsible

to

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fostering

children

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habit

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on

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of

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healhty

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healthy

diet

or it should be

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the parents

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parents

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roles

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.

While

some advocate that

school

have

essential

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role in navigating

children

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habit

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habits

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others believe that

parents

are

holding

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apply

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the

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responsible as the

first

place

to learn.

This

essay will explore

both

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before presenting a reasoned conclusion. On

one

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hand,

school

is

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not only

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as a

place

to learn but

also

a part of

children

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life since they

are

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mostly spend their time at

school

.

School

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also

can make a regulation related to

food

consume

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for their students so it can

creating

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a healthy

diet

habit

.

Additionally

, the

children

will not

feel

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too hard to follow the

rule

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since their friends will

also

doing

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it.

This

environmental support will make the

habit

easier to

followed

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by

children

.

Conversely

, those who believe that a healthy

diet

is

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the parents

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parents

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responsible

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since they act as the

first

place

to learn for their

children

.

In

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a young age,

kid

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the kid

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will only eat what their

parents

serve, so it is essential to teach them

eating

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to eat

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healthy

food

in the

first

place

.

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,

parents

should give

example

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and take

a

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part in consuming

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healthy

food

in their daily

life

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so that their

children

will take

example

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and follow their

habit

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. In my view,

while

both

school

and

parents

have their own vital

roles

, a

balance

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approach that integrates

both

parts is the most beneficial. At home,

parents

can nurture their

children

to have a healthy

diet

while

also

giving them knowledge about its

benefit

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.

School

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can

also

supporting

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them by making

a rules

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rules

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that students should

consuming

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consume

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healthy

food

and

monitoring

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them regularly. In conclusion, the debate

between

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about

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whether

school

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schools

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or

parents

that held responsible for

children

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children's

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healthy

diet

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diets

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highlights each

party

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roles

.

While

school

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schools

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act as environmental support to the

children

,

parents

held

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essential

roles

as the

first

for

children

to learn. A balancing approach for

colaborating

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collaborating

both

school

support and

parents

roles

can make a better outcome for navigating

children

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children's

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healthy

diet

.