You are not happy with the course you are doing at collage and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the collage director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: •what course are you doing now •why you are not satisfied with that course •what course you would like to change
Dear Mr John Smith,
The purpose of writing
this
letter to you is to alter my current to another one which is available at your college.
In the first place
I have to mention that I am Omadi who has been studying in your college for 2 months in terms of Add a comma
place,
computer
science
. Admittedly, this
field is quite interesting and supports not only learning the overall
computer
system but also
finding necessary information fast and effectively on Internet platforms,such
as Google, Chrome, and YouTube.
However
, if I don't know the English
language fully, I can not learn deeply this
field because the computer
system is connected to English
words. Therefore
, I am unable to master a computer
science
course without the English
language. Coming to the request, I want to take part in English
classes which are available in your college instead
of computer
science
. As soon as I have learnt English
, I will start to participate in computer
science
courses which is a more important subject for my future job.
Hoping that you will accept my request and comprehend it clearly, I will wait for your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Omadi YuldashevSubmitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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task response
Include specific reasons why you wish to change courses to strengthen your request.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence, ensure each paragraph clearly centers around a single idea.
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The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, suitable for a formal request.
coherence cohesion
The letter is generally well-structured with a clear introduction and conclusion.