Some people believe that teenagers should always follow the example of the older people. Others believe that teenagers should question what older people say. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some
people
think the elderly in their family should be respected by young adults and children, so they must obey older Use synonyms
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's words. Use synonyms
However
, other Linking Words
humans
feel we can not always follow older Use synonyms
people
's will and actions. After all, every individual has their own opinions and insights.
The elderly are of concern to the family and the country. Use synonyms
Besides
, they play an important role, Linking Words
such
as leaders in some cultures. Because of traditional values, the elderly have been regarded as intelligent beings, they are often responsible for other members of one body, plus they command youngsters to run errands or do tasks. Linking Words
People
who advocate listening to the elderly believe they have abundant societal experience, and Use synonyms
therefore
, it would be better to take their views and do relative Linking Words
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As a result
, they usually hold them in high regard. Linking Words
However
, they are weak groups simultaneously. I think based on a merciful and compassionate nature, most Linking Words
people
are inclined to take care of groups who are physically weak, and Use synonyms
besides
, if Linking Words
this
person is their family, other young adults are willing to resign themself to their Linking Words
seniors
.
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Conversely
, some Linking Words
people
indicate Use synonyms
people
can issue questions and even dissent if Use synonyms
seniors
' methods are not proper or not relevant to Use synonyms
this
contemporary environment. Linking Words
Although
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seniors
indeed have more experience than youngsters, some of them might hold conservative ideas which have already not coincided with the current trend. It is uncertain if new generations always obey old generations, it will cause several lapses when they make decisions. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the most important thing is that we are individuals and we should decide our own lives at will. If young Linking Words
humans
always accept Use synonyms
seniors
' perspectives and Use synonyms
further
take everything they say at face value, it will be a disaster, and it considerably reduces Linking Words
humans
' adaptability to their surroundings.
In a nutshell, as far as I am concerned, we can strike a balance between these two thoughts. Use synonyms
According to
different circumstances, Linking Words
humans
could depend on their intelligence to discern if they follow the elderly's sayings in what kind of situations because it is not always Use synonyms
seniors
who can offer solutions which bring about favourable results.Use synonyms
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