Part 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Part 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the tendency of the preference for the location of
dance
classes for a certain age of
people
, and the bar graph below shows how
people
in
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different ages cling to different types of
dance
classes. As the largest portion in the pie graph shows, it seems that most young
people
prefer classes taught in a professional private studio, rather than in a college-based studio.
Also
,
dance
lessons held in school halls are somehow more popular than in community halls or others, which
has
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a
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6% greater than the latter. Refer to the bar chart, ballet, among all types of dances, has the most figures, reaching 600
people
in the group of age under 11.
On the other hand
, modern
dance
appeals better to the group who are at
the
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age
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between 11
to16
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to 16
, and
conversely
, not as popular as ballet to younger
people
.
However
, for the
last
classification of dances, two groups of
people
are sharing
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a close percentage of students
for
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showing
the
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interests
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interest
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to attend
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to
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the tap class.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words dance, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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