Part 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the tendency of the preference for the location of
dance
classes for a certain age of people
, and the bar graph below shows how people
in
different ages cling to different types of Change preposition
of
dance
classes.
As the largest portion in the pie graph shows, it seems that most young people
prefer classes taught in a professional private studio, rather than in a college-based studio. Also
, dance
lessons held in school halls are somehow more popular than in community halls or others, which has
Verb problem
is
a
6% greater than the latter.
Refer to the bar chart, ballet, among all types of dances, has the most figures, reaching 600 Correct article usage
apply
people
in the group of age under 11. On the other hand
, modern dance
appeals better to the group who are at the
Correct article usage
apply
age
between 11 Replace the word
aged
to16
, and Correct your spelling
to 16
conversely
, not as popular as ballet to younger people
.
However
, for the last
classification of dances, two groups of people
are sharing
a close percentage of students Wrong verb form
share
for
showing Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
interests
Fix the agreement mistake
interest
to attend
Change preposition
in attending
to
the tap class.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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