The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph demonstrates the data collected by months in 2009 about books rented in Malton town library, UK.
Overall
, The number seems to fluctuate peak in December and low in February.
According to
the result, The first quarter of 2009 was
slightly rose in January and fell in the next month by 4 per cent and up again in April. Compare Unnecessary verb
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to the amount of Midyear which was higher and stable In May and double in August. Surprisingly, the number went down to 12 in September, however
at the end
of the year goes up and hit its highest at 21 in December.
In conclusion, the majority of people tend to read books much more during the holiday season and summer break, in contrast
to the second and third months which are the smallest of the year.Submitted by pooppub.pub on
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