The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph demonstrates the data collected by months in 2009 about books rented in Malton town library, UK.

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, The number seems to fluctuate peak in December and low in February.

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the result, The first quarter of 2009

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slightly rose in January and fell in the next month by 4 per cent and up again in April. Compare

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to the amount of Midyear which was higher and stable In May and double in August. Surprisingly, the number went down to 12 in September,

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at the end

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of the year goes up and hit its highest at 21 in December. In conclusion, the majority of people tend to read books much more during the holiday season and summer break,

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to the second and third months which are the smallest of the year.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

138 words

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