The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.
The line graph shows
the
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apply
of
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on
an
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Australia
exports to four different nations, indicated as Correct your spelling
Australian
a
percentages between 1990 Correct article usage
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to
2012.
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and
Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the Australian export figures to developed countries, namely, Japan
and United
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the United
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States
its
downfall, Correct pronoun usage
their
whereas
that of the other two experienced a growing
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growth
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rate.
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To begin
with, a closer look at the line graph in 1990 reported that at approximately 26% Japan
accounted for the largest export percentages among all aforementioned nations, followed by the US at 12%, and the remaining two: China
and India, at less than 5%. During 1990-2000, while
China
graudually
rose to 5%, the Correct your spelling
gradually
exports'
figure in Change noun form
exports
Japan
plummeted to roughly about 18%. On one
hand, the percentages of goods exported to America Correct article usage
the one
were fluctuate
with minimal falling and rising before reaching the same figures in 2000, that of India Wrong verb form
fluctuated
were remained
stable.
From 2000 onwards, Change to the active voice
remained
have remained
China
exports encountered Change noun form
China's
with
exponential growth which eventually reached its peak at about 28% in 2012 but Change preposition
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Japan
slowly fell to 16%. Surprisingly, India export's trend seems to project and
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overtake
China
in 2010 at 3
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, it eventually outnumbered by Replace the word
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China
at
6% in 2012.Change preposition
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