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There are two-line chart diagrams depict changes that the percent of electrical appliance in households in 1920-2019 and the total time of doing housework every weeks in same time.

There are two-line chart diagrams depict changes that the percent of electrical appliance in households in 1920-2019 and the total time of doing housework every weeks in same time.
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The chart demonstrates The percentage of households with the use of three electrical appliances: Washing machines, Refrigerators and
Vacuum
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 cleaners from
years
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the years
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 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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, It shows that the movement of the line significantly increases every year.
According to
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 the data, In 1920, the use of washing machines was highest among other electronic equipment was 40 followed by 30 per
cent
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 for
Vacuum
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 cleaners and almost 0 for Refrigerator. Surprisingly, In 1960, The use of refrigerators rose and hit 90
in
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apply
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30 years later compared to other tools which only stayed at 70 per
cent
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 at the time. In the next 30 years,
Refrigerator
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the Refrigerator
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 still holds the same position
while
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Vacuum
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the Vacuum
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 cleaners nearly catch the same level.
On the other hand
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, Washing machines decreased by 10 per
cent
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 but went up and remained the same number as in 1960. In the end, the result of both the Refrigerator and
Vacuum
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 cleaner was stable at the same percentage,
however
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, the Washing machine which started highest seems to hold the
last
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 place at only 70 per
cent
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.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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