There are two-line chart diagrams depict changes that the percent of electrical appliance in households in 1920-2019 and the total time of doing housework every weeks in same time.
The chart demonstrates The percentage of households with the use of three electrical appliances: Washing machines, Refrigerators and
Vacuum
cleaners from years
1920 to 2019. Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, It shows that the movement of the line significantly increases every year.
According to
the data, In 1920, the use of washing machines was highest among other electronic equipment was 40 followed by 30 per cent
for Vacuum
cleaners and almost 0 for Refrigerator. Surprisingly, In 1960, The use of refrigerators rose and hit 90 in
30 years later compared to other tools which only stayed at 70 per Change preposition
apply
cent
at the time. In the next 30 years, Refrigerator
still holds the same position Correct article usage
the Refrigerator
while
Vacuum
cleaners nearly catch the same level. Correct article usage
the Vacuum
On the other hand
, Washing machines decreased by 10 per cent
but went up and remained the same number as in 1960.
In the end, the result of both the Refrigerator and Vacuum
cleaner was stable at the same percentage, however
, the Washing machine which started highest seems to hold the last
place at only 70 per cent
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