The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied map illustrates a small city centre which is called Islip at the present
,
and the future schedules for it.
A glance at the map reveals that the whole area will witness a lot of various urbanizations and developments in the future.
Based on the planned development, the whole Islip is going to be surrounded by a main road which has Remove the comma
apply
dual
carriageway, except Correct article usage
a dual
of
school and housing. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, there are two large shops at the top and below of
the main road, which will be demolished and replaced by new parts, Change preposition
apply
such
as bus
station, shopping centre, car park and new housing in the north of the Islip. Correct article usage
a bus
In addition
, there is a huge area for housing in the middle of the town which is going to be removed and turned into shops and pedestrians only region.
Another striking construction is the erection of the new housing in the below of the shops areain
the future. Correct your spelling
area in
are in
Furthermore
, there is an enormous park in the east of the town right now, which will be shrunk next to the new housing region in
some years later. It is interesting to note that the housing part and school are going to Change preposition
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be remained
unchanged Wrong verb form
remain
according to
the planned development.Submitted by TUTOO on
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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