The diagram shows the first industrial process for making dough. Write your essay in 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the

process

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of

dough

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making, which involves three important stages, including the pre-

production

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,

production

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, and

post –

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post–production

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production

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stage

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.

First,

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in the

pre

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pre-production

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production

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stage

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, the three main ingredients

such

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as water, flour, and yeast are poured into the industrial mixer in order to be mixed evenly.

Then

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, the mixed

dough

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will be stored in a glass box, and some additives will be added to ferment the

dough

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. After being fermented, the

dough

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is moved into a divider machine and

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cut into several pieces. It

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falls eventually into a plunger machine and

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pushed

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a rotating

cylinder

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. When the

dough

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is pushed by the plunger machine, an irregular round shape is created and it

was

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taken by the rotating

cylinder

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.

Finally

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, the rotating

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then

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forward

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the

dough

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into the conveyor belt to go to the next

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.

To conclude

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, the

process

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of bread

dough

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making is quite simple

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that

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is capital intensive. The

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is started

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starts

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with the pre-

production

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stage

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where the

dough

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are

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mixed. After the pre-

production

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stage

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is the

production

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stage

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where the

dough

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are

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fermented,

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apply

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cut into pieces, and shaped.

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, the

last

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stage

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is the

post

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post-production

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production

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test where the

dough

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is moved to the rotating

cylinder

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and conveyor belt.