The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The diagram shows a
town
of 65,000 people called Garlsdon
, Correct your spelling
Carlson
as well as
illustrating
two potential locations for a new Wrong verb form
illustrates
supermarket
in this
town
.
Overall
, what sets the first location, S1, apart from the second,
S2, is that the former is in the countryside, on the outskirts of Garlsdon
, whereas
the latter occupies a more urban and central position in Garlsdon
.
Looking first at S1, if the supermarket
were placed here, it would be positioned in/to the northwest of Garlsdon
in the countryside. Also
, it would be flanked by the railway and the main road to Hindon, a town
12 km away with a population of 10,000.
If built on the S2 site, however
, the supermarket
would be to the north of the southern industrial area and to the south of the railway. The supermarket
would be situated within the pedestrianized town
center
, which is surrounded by the housing area. To the west and east of the Change the spelling
centre
supermarket
would be the roads leading to Bransdon and Cransdon, respectively, with the former being 16 km southwest and holding 15,000 residents, while
the latter is 25 km southeast and is home to 29,000 inhabitants.Submitted by thunganpham.work on
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