The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant

The two maps below show an olympic and paraolympic village in 2000 and the same village today Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant
The maps provide information on the development of the Olympic and Paralympic village that has been going on since 2000 till now. The data clearly illustrate the transformation and extension of the area. Back in 2000, the village consisted of two parts divided by the river in the middle. The western part comprises a car park with a welcoming
centre
as well as
a fitness
centre
on
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the south. The second part,
on the other hand
, had an empty building next to the road bypassing the river on the south, and two athlete accommodations in the middle next to the smaller parking located on the eastern edge of the complex.
In contrast
, till now, the area has undergone a massive development. The western side was extended by a village square that was placed below the fitness
centre
and medicine
centre
which was constructed on the former place of welcoming
centre
which was relocated next to the square.
In addition
, a second road was constructed linking the both sides of the complex. The easter side,
similarly
, was extended by both disabled and the third normal athlete accommodations. The empty building was replaced by a medicine building and in the original place of the car park a multi-faith
centre
was built. Parking,
on the other hand
, was relocated to the northern edge of the map.
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