The issue of urbanization has been a disputatious and contentious matter recently. It has been argued that some individuals leave the countryside for better chances which are offered by cities.
Therefore
, I tend to believe that both the benefits and drawbacks need to be examined in depth.
On the one hand, there are some main advantages of modern cities. Linking Words
firstly
, they are much more comfortable and easier to live in. Linking Words
In other words
, they obtain a wide range of services including transportation, education, houses and medical services. Not only that but they can Linking Words
also
offer some job opportunities leading to an increase in production capacity and the country's income. Linking Words
Secondly
, some people immigrate from the village for entertainment Linking Words
such
as visiting museums and architectural feats.
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On the other hand
, as the garden has weeds, certain disadvantages should be taken into consideration. The most evident one is crimes. To illustrate, the presence of a large number of people with a lot of money to spend increases the attraction of criminals. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the country will be insecure for people. Another wide drawback is pollution Linking Words
due to
using various types of transportation Linking Words
such
as cars, trains or buses. Linking Words
In addition
to suffering from health problems Linking Words
such
as asthma and lung cancer Linking Words
due to
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emission
of gasses and fuels.
In conclusion, I point out that urbanization plays an integral role in enhancing society and the country's outcome. In my point of view, I think that the merits outweigh the established demerits. I hope the government can raise awareness towards the hazards of modern cities.Correct article usage
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