You have received a bill from a mobile phone (or cell phone) company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international calls. Write a letter to the company,. Complaining about this Giving your reasons Asking for the bill to be changed

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Dear Sir/Madam,
This
is to write about the recently incorrect phone
bill
which I received from you and request you to check my call details for correction. Usually, I
received
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receive
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my
bill
$
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for $
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50 every month with taxes, but
this
month you charged me $67
icluding
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including
taxes. when I checked my
bill
details
then
I found you charged me $17 extra for international calls which I did not
used
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use
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.
Further
adding here that I
am
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have been
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using your service
from
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for
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last
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the last
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2 years
i
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I
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never faced
such
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a king
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king
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kind
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of obstacle please check my
bill
details early as possible
otherwise
you
charged
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will charge
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me
next
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the next
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time same amount which will create
issue
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an issue
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for me. I hope you would be empathetic enough to comprehend
of
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apply
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this
from. Looking forward
for
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to
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a positive and prompt response from your side. yours truly, Jas
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Grammar
Ensure to check your letter for grammatical errors and typos, such as 'usually, I received' which should be 'I usually receive' and 'you charged me $17 extra for international calls which I did not used' should be 'you charged me an extra $17 for international calls which I did not use'.
Structure
Provide clearer paragraph breaks to maintain a single idea per paragraph for enhanced clarity. Consider splitting the second paragraph into two separate ideas: one for the bill discrepancy and one for the account history.
Tone
Be more formal in your tone by replacing phrases like 'such king of obstacle' with more accurate expressions like 'such kind of issue'.
Clarity
You have clearly stated your complaint and provided a specific situation related to extra charges.
Format
Your letter follows a formal structure with appropriate greetings and closing remarks.
Task Achievement
The task was achieved by explaining the issue, giving reasons, and making a clear request for rectification.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Billing discrepancy
  • Inaccurate charges
  • Customer service
  • Billing cycle
  • Itemized statement
  • Rectification
  • Resolving billing issues
  • Goodwill gesture
  • Accuracy in billing
  • Proactive communication
  • Service provider
  • Customer satisfaction
  • Adjustment of charges
  • Billing department
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