The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates vital information about
people
who bought coffee
and tea
in 5 different Australian cities. This
unit is measured in percentage
.
Overall
, the graph clearly shows that the ratio of people
who went to a cafe for coffee
or tea
in the last
28 days was the highest of all four
cities: Sydney
, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
According to
what is shown, Melbourne, Sydney
, and Hobart are all approximately the same percentage
of people
who went to a cafe for coffee
or tea
in
Change preposition
apply
the
4 Correct article usage
apply
weeks
ago. However
, there is a slight difference in the number of people
who bought fresh coffee
in the last
four
weeks
. From what is recorded, Sydney
stands for 45% and Melbourne a bit higher than that at 48%. Whereas
, there is a massively growing ratio in Hobart City, about 54%. Whereas
the people
who purchase
fresh Wrong verb form
purchased
coffee
in the past month, Sydney
and Melbourne towns are similarly
in the same percentage
, a bit below 40 per cent.
The residents in the Adelaide and Brisbane towns share the same ratio of people
who bought instant coffee
and attended a cafe for coffee
or tea
in month before . Along with
residents who purchased fresh coffee
and went for coffee
or tea
in the terminal for four
weeks
, they have the same percentage
of 50%. Nevertheless
, they also
stand for a bit below 30% of the humans who bought fresh coffee
in the last
four
weeks
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, coffee, tea, percentage, four, sydney, weeks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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