The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia, for the period 2000 to 2020.

The chart illustrates key information about many
participants
doing 5 different activities at a social centre in Melbourne City, Australia, At various times.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the film club is taking the majority of people's activity. And the
number
of
participants
who are applying for the amateur dramatics event is the lowest
number
.
According to
what is shown, the table tennis activity grew significantly to 55
participants
in 2020 and reached its peak After it was 28
participants
in the year 2000.
On the other hand
, the
number
of
participants
has reduced to 6
participants
in the amateur dramatics activity in the year 2020, After it was 25
participants
in the time of 2000. In terms of musical performance events, it grew from 0 in 2000 to about 28
participants
in 2020; it showed massive change after it was only 0
participants
.
Subsequently
, the martial arts event did not show increasing in the period of time,
in contrast
, it grew slightly in the year 2010; after that, the event went back to the same
number
of 48
participants
at all times.
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