the pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010

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1950 and 2010 represented in percent. In six decades, housing expenses have greatly reduced,

while

other aspects

such

as food, transportation, health, and other categories

rise

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up significantly.

However

, there is a slight decrease in education. As clearly portrayed, housing allocation greatly lowered before which dominated the total expenditure in 1950, reached up to over 70%, in 2010, it was only one-third of its prior percentage (22%).

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, in

this

year, the budget for food led

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of household expenses, upsurging to 34%, thrice from what it was in 1950.

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, there

was

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notable rises about four times in transportation and category for other

expense

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expenses

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, whose previous percentages in 1950 were 3.3% and 4.4% respectively, boosted up to 14% and 19.2% respectively in 2010.

Additionally

,

health

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budget

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doubled in 2010, reaching up to 4.5%. Meanwhile, education expenditure declined slightly, from 6.6% to 6.3%.