The line graph compares the percentage of people in three countries who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009.
The given line graph illustrates the proportion of
internet
Capitalize word
Internet
is
used Unnecessary verb
apply
of
inhabitants in three different Change preposition
by
nation
between 1999 and 2009
From an Fix the agreement mistake
nations
overall
perspective, it is evident that the trend of USA, Canada, Mexico
Correct word choice
and Mexico
is go
up, and the percentages of Canada Change the verb form
is going
has
the best growth rate, other hand Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Mexico
has the lowest growth rate.
Commencing with the year 1999 ,the data on interconnections in USA was the highest , at 25. The information for Canada was lower, at 10. Internet users manufacturing in Mexico
, however
, accounted fror
the lowest value, at 5.
In the following years, by 2005 , Correct your spelling
for
Mexico
web users increased to 28 before reaching 39 in 2009. In common the United States network rose sharply to 70 and Change noun form
Mexico's
peak
at 80 in 2009. At the same time, Wrong verb form
peaked
Canadian
connection rocket climbed to 70 and hit the highest at 100 , making it Correct article usage
the Canadian
top
Correct article usage
the top
users
Fix the agreement mistake
user
at the end
of time
frame.Correct article usage
the time
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