in the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

All coaches, cars and other
transport
drivers will be replaced by robots or artificial intelligence in the near future.
Although
it will be beneficial regarding time consumption and discipline, it may be not a very practical way for transporting
due to
some reasons. On the advantages side, it is a very good idea to have driverless
transport
. Because, people have human factors, which may interfere with work or even lead to some catastrophic situations.
For example
, new drivers may have some mistakes,
while
they are driving, like riding the truck very slow or too fast, and passengers will suffer from them. It is regarding not only new drivers, but every time can happen
such
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when the driver is not concentrated at work.
Therefore
, AI will be a more flexible and depositary way for passengers.
However
,
on the other hand
, if we are talking about disadvantages, it can be a harmful idea. The main reason for
this
is that the employers could lose their jobs and it will not be so safe.
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transport
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available, or maybe there are several problems with stations or even with
transport
, the robot, which is controlling the
transport
will not be able to fix up and solve these issues,
instead
, it will turn off and people will not know what to do.
Therefore
it will be much
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and practical if the
transport
is controlled by humans hand, who
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what to do in emergency situations. In conclusion, in my point of view, the advantages do not outweigh the negative sides, because AI lacks individual ideas compared with humans, who will be able to act even if all systems are out of control.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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