The bar chart shows information  about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart gives data about the two most-liked lessons from two different schools. It can be seen clearly that the best-loved subjects are different between

School

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A and

School

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. Sport has the highest score, compared to others.

While

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pupils at

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adore craft/drawing, it becomes the least interesting in

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To begin

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with, sport

become

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the most attractive one, interacting 41 learners, 36 from

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A and 5 from

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. It is followed by craft/drawing, which become the best subject in

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, chosen by 25 children.

In contrast

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, only 4

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A students choose

this

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. For language, it is adored by 10 individuals from

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, showing twice the number from

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A (5 people).

Additionally

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, 16 learners from both schools choose social science, 6 learners from

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A and 10 students from

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. Only 11 students, 9

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school

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A novices and 2

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pupils, decided science as their favourite subject.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, b with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

158 words

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