The chart below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below show the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011, and 2015

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
Given is a bar chart providing comprehensive information regarding
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the number of families sorted by their annual earnings in 2007, 2011, and 2015. Taking a fleeting scan at the set-out data, it can be discerned that the number of households which got richer
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increased and the gap between them and other families became larger over the course of 8 years. A closer look at the infographic shows that, households which gained $1000000 or more experienced a decline and
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the nadir
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about
27.5millions
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27.5 million
by 2011 before
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into somewhere in the vicinity of
33millions
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33 million
in 2015.
While the
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same pattern happened for those with
annual
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income of $75000-$99999 and the figure
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till 15millions
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to 15 million
by 2015 after
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subside
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to about
14millions
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14 million
in 2011.
On the other hand
, the figure of $50000-$74999 remained relatively unchanged.
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with
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earning of less than $25000 witnessed an upward trend till
near 29millions
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nearly 29 million
by 2011, following that decrease smoothly into about
26millions
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26 million
in 2015.
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the same time figure associated with the
gaining
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of $25000-$49999 underwent a similar trend between 2007 and 2015.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution
  • household income
  • economic fluctuations
  • income brackets
  • economic downturns
  • economic growth
  • global financial crisis
  • recovery
  • middle-income bracket
  • trends
  • proportion
  • stability
  • stagnation
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