Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present time,

many

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tragic

content

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has been shown to the public through

the

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apply

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internet

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channels. Some individuals suggest that the government should control what is presented to the people. In my opinion,

governmnts

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governments

must have

polices

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policies

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to evaluate the

content

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and check information reliability in order to manage

people

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people's

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mental safety.

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essay will illustrate why the government should supervise the

content

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on the

internet

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and what are the solutions for

this

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issue.

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, kids and teenagers are the most affected group

from

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by

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the harmful

content

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in

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on

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nawadays

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nowadays

websites. Many children have committed

a

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apply

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violant

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violent

behavior

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behaviour

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in the past few

yaers

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years

.

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,

juveniles

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juvenile

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violant

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violence

incidence has increased to 30% in the United States since the horror

content

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of the

internet

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has

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begon

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began

.

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, many parents complain about bad ideas

of

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apply

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their

kid's

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kids

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who gain it from the

internent

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Internet

recently.

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, many children have ideas about criminal organization plans that may affect kids mental status.

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,

make

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the

internet

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safe for everyone is a hard task to accomplish by the government. One way to achieve

it

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this

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is by

supervise

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supervising

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every online website, especially

which

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those which

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targeted

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target

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the younger generation and

set

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setting

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strict regulations to control it. A simple example is what Governments force

Youtube

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YouTube

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do

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to do

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in regard to the age policy.

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, parents should participate in

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matter by

assess

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assessing

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the online applications that their family

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useing

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using

.

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,

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controlling what is shown on the

internet

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is a very hard mission to achieve by governments, many countries

had

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accomplished that by making deals with

internet

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companies. With technology advancements, many governments already evaluate the

content

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for their citizens.