Some people say that there is too much harmful content on the internet. They say the only way to make the internet safe is for the government to censor the content of websites. To what extent do you think the government should control what information is available on the internet? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In the present time,
many
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tragic
content
has been shown to the public through
the
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internet
channels. Some individuals suggest that the government should control what is presented to the people. In my opinion,
governmnts
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governments
must have
polices
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policies
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to evaluate the
content
and check information reliability in order to manage
people
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people's
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mental safety.
This
essay will illustrate why the government should supervise the
content
on the
internet
and what are the solutions for
this
issue.
Firstly
, kids and teenagers are the most affected group
from
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by
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the harmful
content
in
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on
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nawadays
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nowadays
websites. Many children have committed
a
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apply
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violant
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violent
behavior
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behaviour
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in the past few
yaers
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years
.
For example
,
juveniles
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juvenile
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violant
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violence
incidence has increased to 30% in the United States since the horror
content
of the
internet
has
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begon
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began
.
Moreover
, many parents complain about bad ideas
of
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their
kid's
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kids
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who gain it from the
internent
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Internet
recently.
For instance
, many children have ideas about criminal organization plans that may affect kids mental status.
On the other hand
,
make
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the
internet
safe for everyone is a hard task to accomplish by the government. One way to achieve
it
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this
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is by
supervise
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supervising
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every online website, especially
which
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those which
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targeted
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the younger generation and
set
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setting
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strict regulations to control it. A simple example is what Governments force
Youtube
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YouTube
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do
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in regard to the age policy.
In addition
, parents should participate in
this
matter by
assess
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the online applications that their family
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useing
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using
.
To sum up
,
although
controlling what is shown on the
internet
is a very hard mission to achieve by governments, many countries
had
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have
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accomplished that by making deals with
internet
companies. With technology advancements, many governments already evaluate the
content
for their citizens.
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language accuracy
Improve the accuracy of language by checking for spelling and grammatical errors. For instance, correct spellings like 'governmnts' to 'governments' and 'polices' to 'policies'.
content
Provide more balanced arguments by discussing potential drawbacks or challenges of government censorship on internet content.
cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity and cohesion.
structure
The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
examples
You effectively used examples such as the increase in violent behavior linked to horror content to support your arguments.
task response
The essay addresses the topic and responds to the question by discussing the role of government in regulating internet content.
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