The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.

The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.
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The graph illustrates the average number of
students
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in a
class
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in primary
schools
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and low secondary
schools
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in 6 countries (South Korea, Japan, the
UK
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, Mexico, Denmark, Iceland and the rest of the
world
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) in the year 2006. It is notable that Asian countries had a higher average of
students
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per
class
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compared to European countries.
Whereas
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, the
UK
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had a similar number to the rest of the
world
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. The number of children in one
class
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in lower secondary
schools
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was the highest in South Korea and Japan with around 35
students
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.
Similarly
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, the average count of
students
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in primary school was 34 in South Korea and 29 in Japan. Denmark and Iceland had similar figures for
class
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occupancy by 20
students
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in each stage of
schools
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.
On the other hand
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, Mexico had a significant difference in the average size of a
class
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between primary and lower secondary
schools
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with 20
students
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and 30, respectively. A
class
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in primary school in the
UK
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and the
world
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had around 25
students
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whereas
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, lower secondary school had around 20 in the
UK
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and 25 in the
world
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, class, schools, uk, world with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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