The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.

The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.
The graph illustrates the average number of
students
in a
class
in primary
schools
and low secondary
schools
in 6 countries (South Korea, Japan, the
UK
, Mexico, Denmark, Iceland and the rest of the
world
) in the year 2006. It is notable that Asian countries had a higher average of
students
per
class
compared to European countries.
Whereas
, the
UK
had a similar number to the rest of the
world
. The number of children in one
class
in lower secondary
schools
was the highest in South Korea and Japan with around 35
students
.
Similarly
, the average count of
students
in primary school was 34 in South Korea and 29 in Japan. Denmark and Iceland had similar figures for
class
occupancy by 20
students
in each stage of
schools
.
On the other hand
, Mexico had a significant difference in the average size of a
class
between primary and lower secondary
schools
with 20
students
and 30, respectively. A
class
in primary school in the
UK
and the
world
had around 25
students
whereas
, lower secondary school had around 20 in the
UK
and 25 in the
world
.
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