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The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They were from the United States in 2008.

The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They were from the United States in 2008.
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The pie chart depicts information associated with the
percentage
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 of women in the lower class which consists of four statuses, particularly unmarried
individuals
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 with no
kids
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, married
individuals
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 with no
kids
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 married
individuals
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 with having
kids
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, and unmarried
individuals
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 with having
kids
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, and the bar chart demonstrates data related to the
percentage
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 of destitute rates by gender and age from Great Britan in 2008. In terms of male
individuals
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,
this
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 information illustrates that male citizens of approximately under 5
years
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 old in the UK were dramatically destitute by 22%, and
then
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 constantly mitigated from 6 to 59
years
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 old by roughly 15% to 8%.
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, the
percentage
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 of poor index mildly climbed by 11% and came down again in parts of 65
years
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 old to over 75
years
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 old. In terms of female
individuals
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,
this
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 data reveals that the growth rates of females in the lower class plummeted from under 5
years
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 old to 17
years
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 old
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 during 18 to 24 ages severely vacillated by 23% when compared to other ages.
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,
this
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 rate constantly plummeted from 25 to 54
years
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 old and slightly escalated until dramatically enhancing the
percentage
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. To recapitulate, despite slightly mitigated destitute rates of married
individuals
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 with no
kids
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 and married
individuals
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 with having
kids
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, unmarried
individuals
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 with no
kids
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 were the highest
by
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 54%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, individuals, kids, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "plummeted" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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